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How's My Anatomy?? by duskingxwarrior How's My Anatomy?? by duskingxwarrior
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Okay the tail is to chunky, long haired cats have the same sorta tail as short haired, they just tend to be thicker or more fuzzy. Also the back legs are to thick, and it hard to tell where the ankle joint starts. I suggest making the back legs thinner and more defined. The nose/muzzle is to pointy, and the space between the forehead and muzzle is to big, try to make the forehead less and the muzzle more blunt. The ears are another thing. The ears aren't directly on top of the head, they're kind of next to the jawline so you can see that the head connects with the neck.

sorry if that was confusing LOL but thats the best i can do
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I love this and great job but the only thing is is that the back legs are a little thick and the tails a little short and thick and the nose is a lttle pointed the ears a little far back two if u pushed it up a little it would look great and i dont really know where the ankle bone is on the back legs the front ones are a little better but i still cant see the bone the paws are good but thay are a little pointy. I love this again great job and keep up the good work.😉
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scratchy-neon Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
crap
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scratchy-neon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
oh my
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LyraGoldenWarriorCat Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the back leg is a little bit round. If you shortened the length of the "shin" and made the "tigh" more horizantal that would do it. The front leg is a little bit funny at the joints. But, hey, what am I saying? I couldn't do anything better >A<
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TheCannibalWolf Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
original cat tail plz
The snout isn't supposed to be that long and, sticking out. both ears show, cat also have cheeks.
the joint on the back leg is too low, cats have thumbs close to their paws, like dew claws
all legs should be the same leg
also, the legs in the back the (left hind leg and back leg) should have the paw pads showing.
make sure to have lips, like all cats do. the black rim around the eyes and mouth
the shading is poor, as more light should touch the hidden muscles of the cat.
you didn't draw the pupil in the cats eyes, the green should be a bit more pale.
check tamberella's anatomy tutorial(s)
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BanglesOkapi Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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intoxicated-with-paw Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very good! tails a bit large, good on all the legs accept the one on this side to the left. a bit awkward. other than that great!
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gayloqu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
is this hollyleaf?
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duskingxwarrior Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
yus it is, this picture is in a MAP part I'm working on ^^
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gayloqu Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Squee <3 i love hollyleaf,Great work ^^
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soundandscar Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg this is really good
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