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What do ya think of my anatomy??
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Critique by *Hawk-Z-Shadow Dec 30, 2012, 12:18:24 PM
I for one think this is fairly good if you're just paying attention to the overall anatomy. The tail is a bit short, but since this isn't realistic that's completely acceptable. The front legs are a bit thick... the way a front leg bends, if you didn't know, is it can bend forward towards the top and backwards right over the paw. The back legs are fine, if a bit thick, just keep in mind that the reason the back of the back leg (wow rhetorical I know) juts out like it does is because the bone on the bottom of the back leg is sticking out backwards a bit. With that said, you should make the curve on the front of the back leg end higher. The body is spot-on, so keep that up... let's see... the eye and nose are great, I really like your style for those. The cheek fur would end a bit higher than that in reality, though do that however you want. The ears naturally perk up, but if they're flattened they do so to the sides, and not the back. They sometimes tilt a bit forward though. Other than that small stuff, this is really great! Keep up the good work :)
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Critique by *Neothecat13 Dec 27, 2012, 8:31:36 PM
I love this and great job but the only thing is is that the back legs are a little thick and the tails a little short and thick and the nose is a lttle pointed the ears a little far back two if u pushed it up a little it would look great and i dont really know where the ankle bone is on the back legs the front ones are a little better but i still cant see the bone the paws are good but thay are a little pointy. I love this again great job and keep up the good work.😉
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~LyraGoldenWarriorCat Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the back leg is a little bit round. If you shortened the length of the "shin" and made the "tigh" more horizantal that would do it. The front leg is a little bit funny at the joints. But, hey, what am I saying? I couldn't do anything better >A<
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~TheCannibalWolf Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
original cat tail plz
The snout isn't supposed to be that long and, sticking out. both ears show, cat also have cheeks.
the joint on the back leg is too low, cats have thumbs close to their paws, like dew claws
all legs should be the same leg
also, the legs in the back the (left hind leg and back leg) should have the paw pads showing.
make sure to have lips, like all cats do. the black rim around the eyes and mouth
the shading is poor, as more light should touch the hidden muscles of the cat.
you didn't draw the pupil in the cats eyes, the green should be a bit more pale.
check tamberella's anatomy tutorial(s)
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*BanglesOkapi Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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*couragespirit Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very good! tails a bit large, good on all the legs accept the one on this side to the left. a bit awkward. other than that great!
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*ll-Ruby-ll Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
is this hollyleaf?
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~duskingxwarrior Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
yus it is, this picture is in a MAP part I'm working on ^^
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*ll-Ruby-ll Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Squee <3 i love hollyleaf,Great work ^^
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~soundandscar Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg this is really good
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~duskingxwarrior Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
thank you :)
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~soundandscar Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^U^
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